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Welcome, year 13, to the Unit 4 coursework blog. Here, you can ask questions, share strategies, and find direct links to the most useful web resources for Literature. It will also give you an update on homework tasks and any essays set.

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Sunday 23 May 2010

REVISION SESSIONS TOMORROW



Just to remind you all that there are revision sessions tomorrow, at the normal time of our English lessons. I'll be going through the format of the paper, looking briefly at Of Mice and Men and explaining strategies for answering questions and planning essays.

Some of you have asked if you can go to the 'other' session because of language exams. Of course, that's absolutely fine (and should work perfectly in terms of numbers), but I wouldn't recommend (as some have suggested) that you should try coming to both sessions, as though I appreciate such keenness, you'll just find them a repeat of each other.

Looking forward to seeing you all again!

Wednesday 19 May 2010

Literature exam queries

Oh Rupert--I'm sorry! Of course there are textual variants, though that may just be my bad memory. Stick with the Anthology version, it's what will be in the exam...

In answer to Paridhi... In the literature exam you will be given (probably) two named poems, though they do sometimes vary this, for instance by giving you two lists from which you can pick. They will never give you more than two named poems, but they can choose from either Duffy, Armitage or the pre-1914 poetry bank.

You can compare the poems however you like--you don't have to compare two and two--in fact, if you do you may limit what you can say. For instance, when looking at a comparison involving 'My Last Duchess', 'The Laboratory', 'Havisham' and 'Hitcher', you might well want to compare the two Browning poems, but then move on to consider how female speaking voices are created by Duffy and Browning.

Good practice for this paper is to make cards with all the poem names on them, and question cards, and pick up four poem cards, trying to make connections between them quickly with regard to a particular question--this will sharpen you up for the quick thinking you need in the exam! In the same way, writing introductions rather than full essays can be good practice for establishing that initial comparison. I've just been doing this with the revision groups, and although you do come up with some strange combinations (compare parent/child relationships in 'Inversnaid' and 'My Last Duchess' for instance) at the least it makes you realise how relatively easy the exam is in comparison! I'm assuming here that you have detailed notes on all the poems and know them well--that is the very first step for revision.

I'll post a list of question openers below, which you could use for that game if you like...



• Compare how attitudes towards other people are shown

• Compare the ways relationships between parents and children are presented

• Compare the ways family relationships are presented

• Compare features of language which have interested you

• Compare the ways suffering is presented

• Compare the ways the poets present violence

• Compare how strong feelings are presented

• Compare how memories are presented

• Compare how death or the threat of death is presented

• Compare how women are presented

• Compare the ways the poets present family relationships

• Compare how attitudes to loved ones are presented

• Compare how speakers are presented (male or female)

• Compare how young people are presented

• Did you enjoy reading the poems in the AQA English Literature Anthology?
Compare your responses to…

• People sometimes have strong reactions to the poems in the AQA English Literature Anthology. Compare your responses to…

Tuesday 18 May 2010

The Buzz words for poetry

All you ever wanted to know about 'technical' poetry words - but were too frightened to ask ...

Alliteration: repetition of closely connected words beginning with the same letter, usually a consonant. It is used to highlight the feeling of sound and movement, to intensify meaning, or to bind words together, e.g. "the burning bushes" or " Sing a song of sixpence"!

Antithesis: contrasting two unlike things, often in the same line, or phrase. Antithesis is often part of the use of Petrachan convention in love poetry, e.g. “Alas, what is this wonder malady? For heat of cold, for cold of heat I die!”

Assonance: repetition of similar or identical vowel sounds in words which follow each other, especially when the vowel is stressed, i.e. "Now as I was young and easy under the apple boughs/ About the lilting house and happy as the grass is green."

Ballad: a simple song which tells a story through dialogue, and which is characterized by uncomplicated language and melodic refrain. The literary ballad is a narrative poem written in imitation of the folk ballad. Each verse is made up of four lines, with the second and fourth line endings rhyming.

Bathos: ‘from the sublime to the ridiculous’; a sudden, usually comic, change of tone from the heightened to the down-to-earth.

Couplet: Two successive lines of poetry that rhyme. ‘Heroic Couplets’ are couplets written in iambic pentameter.

Dramatic Monologue: A poem in the first person, which is set as though it were a speech from a play, with an unseen listener to whom it is directed. The monologue is usually ironic, revealing things about the speaker’s character or motives in addition to those things which the speaker intends to reveal.

Enjambement (or enjambment; both spellings are acceptable): a line ending in which the syntax, rhythm and thought are continued and completed in the next line, i.e. "But in contentment I still feel/ the need of some imperishable bliss."

Half-Rhyme: a rhyme which, although it creates a similarity of sound, does not rhyme on every syllable, or (like ‘blue’ and ‘truly’) rhymes on only the first part of the word.

Hyperbole: ‘over the top’ exaggeration

Iambic: A two-beat metre made up of iambs. Each iambic unit has a weak stress followed by a strong stress. Five iambic units of stress make iambic pentameter, e.g. ‘Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?’ (strong stresses underlined).

Imagery: use of pictures, figures of speech and description to evoke ideas feelings, objects actions, states of mind etc.

Irony: saying one thing while implying its opposite, or something that transforms the first idea.

Lyric: originally poetry meant to be sung, accompanied by lyre or lute. Now refers to category of poetry that is short, concentrated in expression, personal in its subject matter, and songlike in quality.

Metaphor: like the simile, is based on a point of similarity between two things; but whereas the simile states that one thing is like another, the metaphor identifies them completely. Thus, "the child chattered like a monkey" is a simile, but "that child is a perfect monkey" is a metaphor.

Metre: The pattern of stress within a line or lines of poetry. Most common metres, like iambic pentameter, rely on alternating strong and weak stresses.

Onomatopoeia: use of words which echo their meaning in sound, e.g. "snap", crackle" and "pop"!

Personification: technique of presenting things which are not human as if they were human, i.e. "The Ballad of John Barleycorn"

Petrachan Conventions: Exaggerated and hyperbolic praise of the beloved, together with the idea that the lover suffers and strives towards an unattainable ideal. The ideas that Shakespeare satirizes in sonnet 130.

Quatrain: A four-line stanza.

Refrain: a recurring phrase or line, especially at the end of a verse, or appearing irregularly throughout a song or poem. It is used to create unity, to accumulate plot and meaning or to maintain rhythm and melody.

Rhyme: The use of words with matching sounds, usually at the end of each line.

Similes: compare things which are alike in some respect, although they may be different in their general nature, i.e. "as light as a feather" or "sleeping like a baby". Similes always use ‘like’ or ‘as’.

Sonnet: A poem of fourteen lines, generally in iambic pentameter, consisting of a closely-rhymed octet followed by a similarly rhymed sestet. Generally, a problem is proposed in the first half of the poem, which is then resolved in the second, with a ‘turn’ between the octet and sestet. Shakespearian sonnets generally end with a couplet.

Stanza: another word for verse. NEVER use ‘paragraph’ to refer to poetry!

Symbol: when a word, phrase or image 'stands for' or evokes a complex set of ideas, the meaning of which is determined by the surrounding context, i.e. the sun can symbolize life and energy, a red rose can symbolize romantic love.

Trochaic: A metre which is the opposite to iambic, consisting of a strong stress followed by a weak stress. A line such as ‘Hubble bubble toil and trouble’ (strong stresses underlined) is an example of trochaic tetrameter—that is, each line is made up of four trochees.

Revision and other matters

Great to see so many people getting involved--and sorry for not replying earlier. SO... I shall create a list of questions both for Of Mice and Men and for the poetry, and post it up. Also a list of useful terms...

When you're thinking about the effects of poetic structures such as alliteration and assonance, a good way to approach it is to just consider how it would work if they weren't there... think of a synonym that works in every way apart from the alliteration or whatever, and see how it changes the impact of the poem. Remember my exercise about 'The Eagle'?

He holds/grips/clasps the crag with crooked hands
Close to the sun in lonely/distant/foreign lands
Ringed by the blue/azure/cobalt world he stands


The wrinkled/scarred/wavy sea beneath him crawls
He gazes/watches/looks from his mountain walls
And like a thunderbolt he swoops/falls/dives

If you look at the choices there, it's a good way of seeing why Tennyson puts in those devices.

Wednesday 12 May 2010

Writing Introductions

REmember, that your introducetion should really be like a mini-essay plan. It is the way that your examiner will be able to find their way around your essay--like a map, if you like. DON'T, whatever you do, think that you have a wonderful, secret idea that you will spring on the reader at the last minute--bu then they might have lost interest, and find it hard to make the connection. Never save the best until last in an essay.

Sunday 9 May 2010

Essay writing strategies

Eleanor has raised some interesting questions about how to handle your introduction (you can see her whole comment after the last post if you like). I thought it would be worth making this the subject of a new post, as I suspect others may have similar questions. Her first example of an introduction goes like this:

'Many of the characters are lonely, in particular George, Candy and Curley's wife'

This is ok, but that is the sort of answer that lots of students will give. I think that it's better to give a lot more detail, so that the examiner knows where you are heading with your answer. Her alternative opening goes like this:


'Many of the characters are lonely, but all in different ways - Curley's wife is married to a man she doesn't love, Candy is crippled and relies on an old dog for company, and George must keep moving, giving up jobs to look after Lennie, and never making other friends'

I think that is a much stronger opening, because it is more precise and detailed.

Eleanor's concern, which I am sure some of the rest of you share is that

I sometimes feel that if I put all my ideas into the introduction, I won't have anything new to say in the rest of my essay, and will just repeat myself.

Please DON'T worry about this. You certainly won't be using up your best ideas by writing a clear introduction. Remember always that you are simply laying out your stall in the opening paragraphs--explaining the area of your interest, and that doing this will make it easier for the examiners to follow your closer analysis in the next sections.

Another issue Eleanor raises is that of how to quote smoothly.

Can you change quotes to fit them into your sentence, as sometimes they don't make sense, if you want to embed them, but the verb isn't conjugated right, as you're saying, 'he does this' but the book says 'I do this'. Do you just split the quote up around the verb, or put it in brackets or something like that?

This is really important if you want to embed your quotations. ALWAYS make the syntax work. If it doesn't, then don't quote, just refer--in Eleanor's example, imagine that the novel says

"'I do this every day' said George". and you want to say that this quotation shows his exasperation.

You then have various alternatives, if the syntax desn't fit smoothly into your planned sentence. You could use the quotation by framing it as reported speech rather than direct speech: 'George's comment that he does this every day shows his exasperation'

OR, if it is especially dear to your heart that you quote, then just use the words that will fit: 'When George says that he does this "every day", it shows his exasperation'

OR rephrase your own sentence: 'When George says "I do this every day", we see his exasperation'

In the last resort, if you want to change part of a word, you can do this, and indicate it by square brackets. So:

'When George comments how he "do[es] this every day" we sympathise with his exasperation'

This last solution should be used with caution, as it can look inelegant if you are not careful.

Hope this helps.

Thursday 6 May 2010

Of Mice and Men essays

Ah.... essays. Most of you have problems with quotations and analysis. Lots and lots of good ideas, but you need to quote to back the ideas up (and not just storytell) and then push that anaysis further so that it becomes really interesting. Don't forget the assessment objectives! How we love them...